"Darling Smoker" (Darin Sumoka) by Mizuto Aqua inside "My Boy x My Love" published: 1999 volumes: 1 isbn: ISBN4-09-137595-X ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ Darling SMOKER - Inside My Boy x My Love NEKOHANA TEXT RELEASE released: 04-09-04 translation by: kitten_toy done for the exclusive use of Nekohana (http://www.raygungeisha.com/nekohana) Reading the story inside the manga: Actual story starts on page 5, but I am numbering translation like title page is page 1 I will post corresponding actual book page numbers when I come across them. When the person changes bubbles to speak I will repeat their name and continue on with their talk. Disclaimer: This is a non-profit translation. If you like the manga (which we hope you do). We hope you buy the book to follow along with and support the author. ^_^ Please do not take any part of this translation without Nekohana's consent. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ translation guide - descriptions of the scene - :: = thoughts (Izumi's in this story) // = sfx {handwriting inside a bubble} (translator notes) DARLING SMOKER - SHORT [page 109] title page [page 110] Girl: You dumped your boyfriend!? Asahi: Yeah because I saw him with another girl. Asahi: Besides he smoked. [page 111] Girl 1: Asahi... Don't you think smoking is really cool looking. Wasn't it okay before? Asahi: At first it was okay... But everytime he spoke he had a cigarette in his mouth and his hands hid every facial expression, I couldn't see anything. handwriting next to Asahi: to make matters worse there was another girl.. Asahi: Cheating on me, I could kick his butt.. text above her two friends: {angry angry} Asahi: From now on I'll never have a boyfriend who smokes! :: Besides isn't being a minor who smokes is really weird anyways? Asahi: Now on my kisses will always be good, I can be relieved about that.. - Asahi stumbles - Asahi: Kyaaa! // Asahi slipping [page 112] // someone grabs Asahi Itsuru: ughmm... Itsuru: Are you alright? // Asahi blushes Asahi: ah...yes [page 113] Asahi: Thanks very much Itsuru: mmh Itsuru: Be more careful next time // Asahi stunned Asahi: Yeah... Friend 1: Wake up!! Looks like your luck is getting better {I'm so jealous!} Friend 2: The class president just helped you out! {soooo coooool!!} Friend 1: Asahi? Asahi: He's got the best conduct and he's really popular. The class president Nanamori Itsuru Senpai? bubble: he's banner 1: sports athelete banner 2: great looks bubble: and banner 3: angelic personality [page 114] Asahi: And he would never ever be a smoker *heart* text above her 2 friends: {KYAAA!!} {suddenly you're going up a level~~~!!} Friends: And now Asahi go get him! text above friends: hurry!! :: this is so sudden! - Asahi is gone - Friend 1: Once she heard he was the class president she went running after him.. Friend 2: You have to admire her determination... text above Asahi: {peer} [page 115] :: Where is he going? {ha} It couldn't be he's having a rendevous with his girlfriend..? {sigh} // Isturu turns the corner :: How does he has a girlfriend, I haven't heard any rumors about it... {so he should be free} Asahi: Huh? Asahi: Class President where are you... // something clinks Asahi: /blink/ - Itsuru smoking - [page 116] :: WHAAA!? :: {class president?} [page 117] Asahi: He.. words in stone: EXCELLENT CONDUCT Asahi: Heee Asahi: Ah.. Asahi: Eh.. Asahi: Uh... Asahi: Ekk... Itsuru: ..... // Itsuru smiles very big :: a smile? Asahi: eh? [page 118] - Itsuru kisses Asahi - Asahi: !? // Asahi dizzy Asahi: //startled// :: the smoke... // COUGH COUGH COUGH HACK COUGH HACK COUGH // :: iniside my mouth.. [page 119] Asahi: Cough COUGH COUGH HACK Asahi: Wha... What were you thinking! Asahi: Cough COUGH Itsuru: My accomplice *heart* Asahi: WAAAAH [page 120] Asahi: That was my first kiss!! {what is that spray!?} // waaah // SPRAAAAY box pointing to the spray: smoke smell neurtalizer Itsuru: Now you know {i started a while ago} // closes the case Isturu: My treat *heart* above Asahi's head: KYAAAA banner on Asahi: free of smoke smell :: Th...that guy!! :: I can't believe he's so bad!! Teacher: Someone in this class smells good... - Arrow pointing to Asahi - [page 121] - at night Asahi at home - :: My first kiss tasted like cigarettes... Asahi: That excellent conduct and popular class president is the complete opposite from that deliquent. // grabgrab :: eeee!! this is so bad! Asahi: He appears really cool and likable and ... Asahi: his wild side is great too, speaking of great... :: that kiss.. :: it wasn't so bad.. - Asahi blushing - [page 122] Asahi: Ah!! That cigarette smoking guy seems like a deliquent and a devil... // graaabgraaab :: cigarette smoking... // tip tip Asahi: mmh? Asahi: That's right.. If I could make him quit smoking everything would be alright! Asahi: Class President! Itsuru: Ah...Yesterday.. Asahi: President a favor [page 123] banner: very direct Asahi: Quit smoking please. // tension crackling Itsuru: If something is bothering you I will listen.. people chattering: {the class president a smoker?} {what a crazy idea} {that girl's got problems} sign: student staff room ??: tch Itsuru: What in the hell are your plans? 1st year class B Nagase Asahi-san Asahi: Eh? You know my name Itsuru: Yeah the class president remembers all the names :: so cool... ... END of PART one of DARLING SMOKER [page 124] Asahi: That the class president was really Nanamori-senpai was a cigarette smoker. If the students heard that they'd be very sad! // Asahi looking up honestly Itsuru: Well if no leaks it out it will be alright. // Itsuru smiles Asahi: I'll leak it out. // Itsuru upset Itsuru: Do you think what you say someone will really believe you? Asahi: I think so. Itsuru: eh? Asahi: But I'll eventually make you quit anyways. Asahi: Be ready! - Asahi leaves - [page 125] // door closes Itsuru: What? That girl... handwriting next to Itsuru: {now that she's gone} Itsuru: ! // Itsuru laughing // cigarettes unravelling Itsuru: They're all damaged... next to cigarettes: {the challenge has begun *heart*} // grab cigarettes Asahi: I will definately make him stop, no matter what it takes. Girls: Class president [page 126] Girls: Sunday the 14th we're making a chocolate cake for Valentines Day. However we thought on the 15th on Monday we could give it to you, please? :: ah... class president Itsuru: I'd be delighted // Itsuru smiles Asahi: He's wearing such a big smile.... box: But she's been decieved by that smiling face. crowd: {kyaaa come on *heart* hurry up *heart*} Asahi: What are you up to... trapping those girls. sign: student staff room :: the opposide side // spllllash [page 127] // Itsuru soaked :: this deliquent ... Itsuru: Why'd you do that? {my cigarettes are soaked} Asahi: This cold of a day and you've got the windows opened and it's freezing! Shouldn't you be thinking that? Itsuru: Indeed Itsuru: But usually do you soak someone because of it? {how am I gunna dry off?} Asahi: Alright, I'll try the heat method next Itsuru: Ah. That would be bad. {no hot stuff.} Asahi: ...but Class President Asahi: your laughter earlier. [page 128] Asahi: I'm not used to seing that in the devil Class President :: this.. :: jealousy... Itsuru: I was exposed by you. Why should I put up a false face in front of you. :: eh? :: a false face.. :: I see :: I don't get his false face :: Why only me... Asahi: Ah before I heard that I was hoping but Asahi: Class president why don't you stop smoking because of that.. text below Asahi: {speaking nicely *heart*} (i.e. pleasant tone) :: eh. [page 129] box: naked. Asahi: Kyaaaaa! Why are you naked!!! {too shocking} Itsuru: You're the one that doused me with water! // Asahi bluuuush Itsuru: ! // Itsuru smiles // Asahi shocked Itsuru: Even tho I'm a smoker my body is pretty good! :: this is... :: the just like the first time.. Itsuru: However if I stop smoking because of Asahi or someone else... [page 130] Itsuru: My body could make you do something very good :: WAAAAAAAAH! Asahi: Someone else... {what of...} Asahi: various... // Asashi smaaacks Itsuru Asahi: Why'd you say that so suddenly!? Itsuru: This is so fun // Itsuru smiles Asahi: Ah...uhm.. // Asahi's heart beats Asahi: A sm... smokers kiss is soooo nasty!! // Asahi slams the door on her way out text next to Itsuru: that was quick Itsuru: {heh} It's a shame that's all she remembers [page 131] // Asahi's heart beating around her thoughts :: That was little shocking :: He was teasing me.. // door opens to where Itsuru was changing Sen: Looks like you were having some fun, Itsuru. banner: Vice President handwriting next to Sen: {What kind of fun were you having} Itsuru: Sen Itsuru: Yeah // Itsuru laughs Itsuru: Someone is trying to make me quit. {Isn't that soo cuute?} Sen: hmmmph Box: National Foundation Day, Everyone has the day off [page 132] Box: School vacation // bored Asahi: I want to see him... He did ask for my address, which is good... :: I know, I know the real Nanamori Class President is a devil, however :: I still think I love him.. // door dingdong! Asahi: Yes? // door opens [page 133] Asahi: {eh?} Vice President!? {sen...Sen Sen Senpai} (what a tongue-twister ^^ His first and last name are Sen) Sen: Nice to see you Sen: Itsuru you waited? Itsuru: Sen, you're late Sen: I had a little buisness to take care of Sen: Is that really healthy for your body right now.. Itsuru: Whatever Sen: I'm going to go get some water, how'd you know about this place Itsuru? Itsuru: Here no one knows me. Sen: Is that so? // sniiiip [page 134] - Asahi cuts his cigarette with scissors - Asahi: You're too optimistic! Itsuru: Gaah.. How'd you get here.. {careful!} Itsuru: {Hey.} Sen this was your little buisness.. Sen: I don't like smoking in school. Sen: Well then, do your best Asahi-chan {make this guy quit.} Asahi: Alright *heart* Itsuru: Sen you asshole! {you're leaving!?} Asahi: Already you're smoking in this place, what if your class makes see you here won't it ruin their perfect image of you! Itsuru: You're the one that's standing out, it will be alright I promise...geez {this place...} [page 135] Itsuru: You're a strange woman Itsuru: heh Itsuru: Whatever brought you here, you might as well stay and take a seat over there. Asahi: okay :: like that.. :: he's not even questioning why i'm here, but.. :: Doesn't it feel like a bit of a date? // Asahi squeals "squeeee" Guy: Beautiful hair // Guy grabs her hair Guy: You alone? Hey why don't you join us? Guy: {Asahi - I'm not really by myself} I said.... // impact - something being thrown [page 136] :: whaaa? :: ICE PICK!? // guys shocked Itsuru: Sorry my hand slipped. You guys are making trouble. Asahi: Cla...class president? Itsuru: You can mess with her hair Itsuru: but [page 137] Itsuru: You don't want to make me mad do you? text near the guys: eeeek, we're in trouble! :: uwaaaa :: that speech... :: he saved me from those guys.. :: should I be happy... // crowd noise crowd people: what? a fight? [page 138] Itsuru: geez... everyone's staring.. // Itsuru dreads // uncomfortable silence from the crowd Asahi: Class president let's leave Itsuru: I still need to mess around Asahi: IDIOT! Asahi: Come on now... Itsuru: Aren't I the class president..? Asahi: Thanks for your help back there... but you were really standing out back there. What if someone from our school saw you there.. [page 139] Asahi: ...tch..someone might ask questions.. {i'm worried} // touch touch Itsuru: Your hair it was loose last time, I liked it that way... Itsuru: That's all I know about the person in front of me, but Itsuru: I'd like to see more about the person inside (needs to be reworded ^^;;) :: he said that with such a serious face... [page 140] :: i feel weak.. // heartbeats surround her Asahi: It get it, now let go of my hair.. Asahi: hrmm? sign: Nanamori Isturu as of today is dismissed from his class president duties, and is suspended for a week from school. :: Someone saw us yesterday afterall.. :: But why... just for being at a club? Sen: Asahi-chan Asahi: It isn't for being at a club, but for smoking underage? [page 141] Teacher: You were seen yesterday at a rather dishonourable establishment with another student. The identity of the other student is not known. Teacher 2: You were also seen smoking at the club... ughmm Nanamori-kun?.. Teacher: After the female student is discovered she will be expelled as well.. // lighter flicks // over the teacher's head "KYAAAA" // inhales // breathes out Itsuru: I guess the truth is out? [page 142] Sen: Asahi-chan? // Asahi running :: this... :: is he doing this to protect me..? Asahi: Class President! Itsuru: Asahi Asahi: Why? Is it because of me you are dismissed from being the class president? Itsuru: It's okay about the class president thing, I don't miss it really.. Asahi: {Liar} To know the whole student bodies names, you're not being honest. Itsuru: that was because.. Itsuru: you stood out and spoke to me [page 143] text above girl students: waaaah Asahi: ah.. Itsuru: anyways to continue with us.. Itsuru: {for now..} I should stop // Itsuru stops right in front of Asahi's face Itsuru: I was smoking just a minute ago Itsuru: I've got a week to kill, see you Asahi :: but i... [page 144] :: without him in school :: i have to wait until then... Asahi: He tasted like cigarettes, but I'm still happy... Asahi: Vice President.. Asahi: Tell me where the Class President's house is please! :: he's got excellent conduct but he also acts like a devil :: and he still smokes :: he's the class president.. Itsuru: Yo [page 145] Asahi: I thought you might be bored.. Itsuru: I'm not the kind of person to be bored Itsuru: Why would you think something stupid like that Itsuru: Oh this? Asahi: It's alright Asahi: It doesn't bother me Asahi: Even though you smoke, I love you just the way you are [page 146] Asahi: Even with the cigarette smoking Asahi: Your kiss wasn't so bad Itsuru: I'm not going to smoke anymore Itsuru: This is my last one Asahi: Huh Itsuru: Didn't you want me to quit? Itsuru: Kissing a cigarette smoker was bad.. [page 147] Itsuru: The girl I love said that :: my second kiss was sweet.. :: and tasted like chocolate // stunned box: One week passed Asahi: {Morrrning *heart*} Thanks sweetie Asahi: for waiting Itsuru: Ready to go to school with the former class president? {oh sounds so different} Asahi: That's right you're everyone's former class president Itsuru: Let's go [page 148] Asahi: You're just just my Itsuru right *heart* hrrmmm? box: No! Everyone's crazy about the class president. text above girls: The Wild Class President is soooooo super coool!! ...end of Darling Smoker...