Anata ni Toketai (I want to melt with you) by Shiho Watanabe inside: Himitsu H na Naishobanashi published: 2003 volumes: 1 isbn: ISBN4-09-135356-8 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ translated by kitten_toy (mitzi) mew@fetishlily.net Distributed on mewlicious http://www.raygungeisha.net/mew Translation notes: I translate to learn so I hope I am not too literal or too vague. ^^;; As peeps like to say.. translation is not an exact science. Reading the story inside the manga: Actual story starts on page 207, but I am numbering translation like title page is page 1 I will post corresponding actual book page numbers when I come across them. When the person changes bubbles to speak I will repeat their name and continue on with their talk. Disclaimer: This is a non-profit translation. If you like the manga (which I hope you do). I hope you buy the book to follow along with and support the author. ^_^ Please do not take any part of this translation without my consent. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ translation guide - descriptions of the scene - :: = thoughts (Mebuki's in this story) // = sfx {handwriting inside a bubble} (translator notes) [page 1] title page [page 2] - a girl peers across the way at a boy in glasses - Mebuki: Ah! I see him! Kasuga Riichi-kun *heart* Mebuki's friend: Mebuki he's amazing isn't he.. he 's the top of the class, during break time let's go to that side Mebuki: heehee *heart* :: In Ryokuyou High School the boys and girls learn seperately (Ryokuyou means green leaf btw ^^) :: Each of the buildings face each other [page 3] :: So I get to look at him!! :: The top of the class and so cool and attractive.. :: Surely my ideal!! Mebuki's friend: But it's a shame isn't it... summer break is coming soon and you won't be able to see him right? Mebuki: It will be okay *heart* Mebuki: I'm going to go get tutored by Kazuga-kun *heart* Mebuki's friend: ehhhh? - In the summer, and Mebuki is dressed in everyday clothes - :: This is my chance to confess to him [page 4] :: it's him...!! :: Wooow in plain clothes he's so coooool! text over Mebuki's head: KYAAAA Another woman: Ahh Kasugaa!? :: !? Another woman: Long time no see... I haven't seen you since Junior High Another woman: Kasuga are you here taking the summer class :: woow, she's such a pretty girl :: junior high classmates together... :: It's dangerous that girls like her are around... :: Kasuga-kun is someone many people stare at :: ~~~slowly hope is fading [page 5] :: I better move fast and hope for victory! Mebuki: {Ka...} Kasuga-kun..!! Mebuki: I'm sorry to bother you.. ughmmm I.. go to highschool with you and I'm Toriume Mebuki and I want to say.. Mebuki: Ughmm... Always think you are... the thing is... Mebuki: {ughmm} I like you, will you please go out with me!? - Mebuki is seriously blushing - :: I said it!! Kasuga: ....alright Mebuki: eh - Kasuga removes his glasses (kitten swoons) - Kasuga: ...Well now... I would like a fair reward for saying yes [page 6] - Kasuga leans very close to Mebuki - ::... wh...at..? Mebuki: ....eh...Kasuga... - Kasuga grabs her wrists and holds her tightly and then kisses her deeply - Mebuki: ...nnnnn [page 7] - various images of them kissing very passionately - // Mebuki pants // Kasuga laughs lightly Kasuga: Feel anything? - Mebuki blushing and looking shocked - Kasuga: Well Mebuki Kasuga: Did you not expect me as a guy to want to kiss you. [page 8] :: ...wha... // Mebuki turns to run away :: why!? :: Why did you do that!? :: My idea of him was completely different :: He was so calm when he did such a thing to me, are they the same person! :: It's all a lie... I can't believe I confessed to such a guy.. [page 9] - the next day at the summer school - :: Why is this happening!? Kasuga: (smiling) ....good morning // Mebuki's heart beats :: Why is he acting so casual about all of this! Mebuki: ...morning - Mebuki is blushing completely red - Kasuga: Why are you in such a bad mood? Was it not satisfying enough. Kasuga: Was yesterday's kiss not enough for you? :: whaaaat! Mebuki: ~~~ It's nothing like that! It was shocking and different from what I have dreamed of. Mebuki: You're the worst! Nothing like the person I thought of you were! [page 10] :: ...ah // Mebuki's heart beats Another woman: (woman from earlier) Kasuuga! Morning! Another woman: We have the lecture together today would it be alright if I said next to you? :: ...that moment :: did he look hurt by what I said? :: maybe I went too far.. :: He acted so sly when he kissed me I didn't what to do. I didn't think about anything, but that look on his face.. :: I didn't struggle against him :: Now he's behind me and when I think about it my heart beats madly :: I feel so aware of him Teacher: The next question... Toriume!! [page 11] Mebuki: Ye...YES!!? Teacher: Your answer for #2? Mebuki: Yes...a...ughmm... :: I don't know // Mebuki feeling nervous Random student: What, does this girl not know the answer? Random student 2: This girl She's in a girl's only class at Ryokuyou High School Random student 3: Hee! There's guys here. Maybe that's why she came here and not to study. // Mebuki closes her eyes and blushes :: Why is this happening... // Mebuki drops her pencil-case and all the pencils fall to the floor Kasuga: ...Sorry [page 12] Kasuga: May I interrupt the lesson for a moment? I have to go out for a moment. Teacher: ah...sure - Kasuga drops his eraser near her and picks it up - Kasuga: {whispering...} M = 40 [page 13] :: ...eh? Teacher: Toriume do you know the answer...? Mebuki: ...ah.... it's M = 40 Teacher: That's right, next question... :: Why did he just help me...? - after class - sign: reference room Mebuki: Kasu...ga-kun Kasuga: Is there something you want? Mebuki: Yeah.. University preperation [page 14] :: after... Tokyo Univeristy... Kyoto University is really good and I would like to head there Kasuga: (smiling) Are you aiming at getting into the same one as me? Mebuki: Eh... Kasuga: However if we get into different ones I have no objections. - Mebuki blushes and goes nervously crazy - Mebuki: You...you're wrong! Uhmmm here have some juice!! Kasuga: (sweatdrop) This for me? Mebuki: For thanks about earlier Kasuga: Did you buy one for yourself? Mebuki: Ah... no... // Kasuga laughs lightly Kasuga: You want a drink of mine? :: damnit! Mebuki: alright (sweatdrop) // Mebuki grabs the can Kasuga: Then take a sip before I do [page 15] - Mebuki sips - Mebuki: OUCH!! Kasuga: --- Oi What's wrong!? Mebuki: {nothing..} I just cut my lip a little... // Kasuga grabs Mebuki by the chin Mebuki: What are you doing.. Kasuga: Be quiet // Kasuga licks Mebuki's lips // Mebuki's heart thumps :: ah... [page 16] :: he's carressing .... :: my lips.. // Mebuki's heart thumps heavily :: i better stop... :: before I want even more... Kasuga: What's wrong..? - Kasuga is a yummy pose licking his hand - Kasuga: Isn't this what you desire? [page 17] Mebuki: This is wrong! // Mebuki pushes herself away from Kasuga // heartbeats surround Mebuki Mebuki: (blushing) Ah... I'm going home. I'll see you later.. :: ....why? :: "Isn't this what you desire?" :: Why that time :: Did I want to say "yes" .... - Mebuki covers her mouth and blushes - Mebuki: {sigh...} I'm so strange.. :: Those lips :: I wanted more.. [page 18] :: Please let me know.. Teacher: :: I just want this day to end... :: The power Kasuga-kun has is scary... :: I'm already feeling strange... Another girl (girl from earlier): Kasuga! Sorry to bother you, but can I ask you a few questions about math? Kasuga: Sure.. - Mebuki notices Kasuga and the other girl, the other girl has her hand on his arm - text next to the girl and Kasuga: The are going to a private study room sign: Private Study Room :: Wha.. :: What am I doing here... - Mebuki sitting red-faced outside the door - :: What if something happens... Another girl: I... Another girl: Kasuga, I love you [page 19] - Mebuki shocked - :: ....wha Another girl: Kasuga ___________... I know you have a girl you're interested in Another girl: but... Another girl: I'd like to date you, will you please go out with me? Kasuga: ...sorry I can't respond, I'm heading home Another girl: Wait!! Another girl: Is that other girl so great!? That girl is better than me, I can be better for you I promise!! Kasuga: ... so [page 20] Kasuga: Why don't you show me some of that desire? ::....eh!? Kasuga: Right now I'm not even turned on :: ...what!? - the other girl smiles and reaches out to hold Kasuga's head and starts to straddle the chair he is in - Another girl: Kasuga... [page 21] - the other girl closes her eyes to kiss him - // crash! - Mebuki falls to her knees - Another girl: !! Another girl: ...YOU! - Kasuga looks in complete shock - // Mebuki turns and runs away [page 22] :: Why? :: Why did you do such a thing... // Mebuki panting from running :: .... besides why.. :: that time :: when that girl was leaning towards Kasuga-kun to kiss him ... I was jealous.. Guy from Mebuki's school: Toriume...san? Mebuki: {pant} ...eh? Guy from Mebuki's school: ah... finally I find you! [page 23] Toujou: I'm Toujou nice to meet you Toriume-san. Since the first time I saw I liked you. Toujou: I'd be really happy if you'd go out with me Mebuki: eh - Mebuki is blushing and nervous - Mebuki: ah... ughmmm ...eghh // Toujou's heart is beating heavily (he's blushing ^_^) Mebuki: Are you... serious... - Toujoh moves closer to Mebuki - // Mebuki's heart beats nervously - Mebuki remembers the quote from Kasuga - :: "Did you not expect me as a guy to want to kiss you." :: ... I don't want this.. :: I... - Mebuki's eyes go wide in shock when she sees Kasuga - [page 24] - Kasuga appears in the distance behind Toujou - :: Kasu..ga.. Toujou: Toriume-san..? Mebuki: ughmm.. [page 25] - Mebuki sees Kasuga's smiling face and starts to head to him - [page 26] Mebuki: Why? Kasuga: Why did you run away..? Mebuki: What you said to me the first time Mebuki: ... that time my body rapidly felt so strange Mebuki: ... but when I saw that person Kasuga: When they confessed... I wasn't excited at all - Mebuki looks up at him in shock - Kasuga: But Mebuki.. [page 27] - Kasuga grabs Mebuki's hand and puts it over his heart - Kasuga: When I look at you Kasuga: A warmth fills me here Kasuga: ...always.. - a switch view to Kasuga and Mebuki making love - Kasuga: At school I noticed you staring at me Kasuga: Since that time... Every day [page 28] Kasuga: I have desired you - Mebuki and Kasuga in bed - :: I'm melting with you - various images of them enjoying themselves - :: I desire those lips :: sweeter :: make love to me :: all me is filled with so much passion Mebuki: ah... [page 29] :: this is what I hoped for - back at summer school - Mebuki: Riichi you're aiming at the university...? (Riichi first name) Mebuki: ....but that's impossible! Kasuga: It will be alright, it's more than 2 years away... besides Kasuga: Mebuki what would I do without your passion, don't you trust me? [page 30] - Mebuki looks shocked for a moment - Mebuki: (smiling) I don't believe you :: there is still much more sweet passion to come... ...END of ANATA ni TOKETAI