"Amai Yokubou" (Sweet Desire) by Iori Shigano inside: 17-sai Hajimete no H (First time at 17) published: 2001 volumes: 1 isbn: ISBN4-091-35352-5 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ translated by kitten_toy (mitzi) mew@fetishlily.net Distributed on mewlicious http://www.raygungeisha.net/mew Translation notes: I translate to learn so I hope I am not too literal or too vague. ^^;; As peeps like to say.. translation is not an exact science. Reading the story inside the manga: Actual story starts on page 231, but I am numbering translation like title page is page 1 I will post corresponding actual book page numbers when I come across them. When the person changes bubbles to speak I will repeat their name and continue on with their talk. Disclaimer: This is a non-profit translation. If you like the manga (which I hope you do). I hope you buy the book to follow along with and support the author. ^_^ Please do not distribute this translate anywhere. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________ translation guide - descriptions of the scene - :: = thoughts (Maya's in this story) // = sfx (translator notes) AMAI YOKUBOU [page 1] title page [page 2] msg from Iori Shigano [page 3] - scene opens up with a bar and next shot is a guy very close to a girl with her hand on his arm - Guy: Tell me Guy: What did you say, that you missed me, don't deny it. It would give me great pleasure to know. Girl: You're being unreasonable Guy: Say it, say it // slap Girl: Why are you being so insistent, I didn't feel anything!! [page 4] (page 234 in the book) // her slapping him away often Guy: What's up with you, why are you so tight-assed!? - Girl sticks her tongue out at the offending guy - Girl: You lowlife :: Even if I didn't love him, I didn't want that ordeal :: 3 months ago I was dumped by a guy and since... - The girl spots a man walking arm in arm with another woman - Girl: (sweatdrop) Masato... ? Masato: Maya - Maya walks away and down the street - Maya (who was girl previously): ... What.. I'm not delicate Bartender: ... looking good, and single right now [page 5] Bartender: You, Did a guy just hurt your pride. Toughen up and lift up your chin, alright? :: Was he listening!? :: But...wait .. he looks like a good guy :: Is he a bartender? He must be a college student ... :: He's tall.. and has good style.. [page 6] (page 236 in the book) - He grabs Maya's arm - Bartender: Would you like me to make you feel better? [page 7] - He leans in to kiss her but she puts her hand on his chin to hold him back - Maya: Wai...wait - He doesn't listen and kisses her, she closes her eyes tightly - :: What? // Maya shaking - they are deeply kissing now - :: my head feels dizzy this sweetness is numbing my legs :: all my strength is leaving my body [page 8] :: this kiss // Maya starting to wobble and loose her balance Maya: you (in a very close way only one would say to their spouse) [page 9] (page 239 in the book) Bartender: (smiling) Are you alright? // Bartender lightly laughs - Maya blushes madly - Maya::...... yeah - the Bartender's coworker pops in - Bartender's coworker: Ren! What are you doing, hurry up and the lounge is calling you. Bartender/Ren: ...ah what a shame - Ren smiling carelessly at Maya - Ren: see ya! // Ren waving quickly Maya: {huh?!} W...wait a second.. [page 10] - Ren smiles casually - Ren: We'll meet again soon, Maya. // Maya's heart beats :: How did he know my name? - at school - Maya's classmate: A feeling!? [page 11] Maya's classmate: Motokare-san other than a guy!? Why!? (with the exception of a man) - Maya's classmate is shouting so people around them comment "what" "what did she just say?" Maya: He said my name before he left {and then he rushed out.. I've got great luck..} :: Anyways I probably won't see him again :: That guy probably felt nothing at all - Maya has flashback of the kiss - :: That guy.. Maya's classmate: Someone's falling in looooove - Maya's blushing - Maya: Of course not! That impolite guy :: well [page 12] :: He did ask me to come back again, should I do such a thing? :: However, how did he know my name? :: That guy knew it from the beginning... // classmate grabs maya Maya: eh? Maya's classmate: Well now, time to relieve you from your one-time guy daydreaming. We're going to the gym to scope out guys *heart* Maya: Wait a sec... we're going to stare at 1st years... Maya's classmate: Idiot! Honestly there's some hot guys there.. jeez Maya once in a while it's good to stare // Maya sighs Maya: Alright alright {although their our juniors} [page 13] // crowd cheering Maya's classmate: Look over there! 1st year Hizaki Ren-kun // Ren jumping up for the dunk // crowd goes wild // ball swishes thru the hoop [page 14] handwriting next to Ren: {He's so cute!} // Maya's eyes blink with shock - realization - Maya yells: YESTERDAY from THE BAR.. crowd: BAR!?! - Ren sweatdrops and has a look of dread Ren: {eeeks!} [page 15] (page 245 in the book) Ren: Gimme a break, everyone knows now I guess (sweatdrops) Replay - you work there right! - Ren is clutching his head in agony (looks like lead of Theif and Detective ^_^) - Text next to Ren: Part-time jobs against school regulations. Maya: I'm so so...sorry! // Maya bowing in apology Ren: They don't know with bar though - Ren smiles at Maya - Ren: So... wanna meet there again? [page 16] Maya: {So} So It's you!! I thought you were older than me, I'm your senpai! {handwriting to workout} // Maya shocked Ren: It's not "you", it's Hizaki Ren. :: huh? // Ren turns his head away Ren: But you have to call me Ren or I won't answer :: What? I can't believe this guys a kid. Maya: Ren! There.. // Ren smiles // Maya's heart beats Maya: (blushing) Even tho I'm a little relieved to see you. I'm sorry I caused such problems.. - Maya turns to leave - [page 17] - Ren grabs her arm as she turns to leave - Ren: Don't go just yet.. // Maya's heart beats loudly (I will be posting the pic to this page, great use of perspective) [page 18] Ren: Besides Maya, when I kissed you that time didn't it feel good. I question your frigidity... don't you think it's cured? // Maya blushes and gets nervous - Ren carresses a strange of Maya's hair and looks into her eyes - // Maya's heart races :: Already I'm a slave to these feelings // Maya's heart beats madly Maya: .....mmm :: I'm shaking - Ren releases her - Ren: Okay! Now let's go somehere. Come on! // Ren holds out his hand Maya: eh? [page 19] Ren: I caught your hand without fail *heart* Ren: Maaaya :: He looks like an adult, but he acts like a child :: Pushy and impatient and an offensively selfish guy :: so :: why does my heart beat so loudly? Maya: wow, are students allowed here // Maya glancing around Ren: What? Searching around for other guys, is this you first time skipping school.. //Maya punches Ren Ren: (rubbing his hurt head) ...damn why did you have to hit so hard Maya: Shut up, I'll use as much force as I wanna. {I was doing you a favor} [page 20] Maya: Hey, where are we going... Ren: Ah... Just a little bit longer // Maya's heartbeats - Maya sees a block of hotels - :: Lo...Love Hotel Street--!? // Maya shocked :: I can't believe it! Is that where we're going? Is this a joke !? Maya: Wa...wait...a ... second Ren: What do you want? Hurry up! // Maya gulps :: This...can't...be..happening :: I have to stop all of this now..! Ren: What are you saying, today you said you wanted to go here :: eh? [page 21] - Maya spots the bar - sign to love hotel street: - passed right by it :: I was completely mislead! // Maya squeals with delight Ren: What did you have other hopes? - Maya blushing and sweatdropping - Maya: Not really.. - Inside the bar (looks like a picture) - Ren: Come in, the bar owner gave me the keys Maya: Wow! [page 22] - Maya smiling and looking all around - Maya: First time I've ever been into a bar before it opens *heart* The atmosphere of everything is so different, like it's reserved all for us Ren: Now's a good time to make a toast to us - handwriting to work out - - Ren mixing a drink - :: He has big and handsome hands :: I know when I look at this guy, I get excited [page 23] - Ren catches her staring and Maya blushes - // Maya's heartbeat :: Everytime I stare at him my heart races Ren: Here you go Maya: Th...thanks - Maya takes a skip and smiles hugely - Maya: Yummmmy! // glass shining Ren: ahhh I'm glad you like it, it fits you {as expected from a great bartender *heart*} [page 24] Maya: But what are you doing working in a bar {for the money?} Ren: I like it. {2 kanji to workout} Ren: {Ah!} After this wanna go to the hotel (girl ni motel/popular) // Maya's glass drips Maya: Hahaha what are talking about - Maya smiles widely at him - :: This is good, I feel so at ease with Ren :: I like his good and bad sides :: Both sides give me such a good feeling Handwriting next to Ren {it helps that he's a hottie *heart*} Ren: .... I'm happy you came Maya: eh? [page 25] Ren: I like seeing you happy // Maya's heartbeats Maya: ... Wh Maya: What are you saying? That's a bad habit for a 'junior' so immature ... :: damn I should have said that.. I didn't mean those words // Maya's heart beats [page 26] - Ren cups Maya's face and stares into her eyes - Ren: Is your 'junior' so bad? // Maya's heart beats loudly Ren: If it's so bad you can escape. ... will you be able to? :: It's the same temptation, his words make me weak // Maya's heart beats [page 27] :: The sweet passion is bioling over // Ren strokes her lips with his hand Maya: It's not so bad.. :: He touched my lips :: and I let out a long breath // Ren tipping over the drink :: Honestly, I desired this from the beginning [page 28] - Ren and Maya sweating as her shirt is pulled down and they are kissing deeply - :: surely I have waited to feel this love [page 29] - Maya is cuddled into Ren's arm wearing his uniform jacket backwards covering herself and he is kissing her head - Ren: Maya Ren: I'm so tired - Maya blushes madly - // Maya eeeks text next to Ren: empty ^^;; Maya: Idiot! I can't believe you said that! Ren: You're so cute *heart* Maya are you embarrased? Maya: (fully red) Shut up!! - Ren's getting dressed - Maya: ...hey [page 30] // Maya's heart beats Maya: That first time I came here.. why did you kiss me? Ren: I was curious.... [page 31] - Maya blanks in shock and hurt - // Ren's alarm going off Ren: Damn... I can't believe what time it is people are going to be coming in soon. Maya do you know your way back? Maya: Yeah.. :: What was I expecting [page 32] :: That's right. He never said he loved me or anything like that. :: My prudeness was just interesting to him - Maya stares sadly in a shop window and remembers earlier, she notices a hickey on her neck - :: The hickey is proof of my easyness [page 33] :: I'm such a fool... Masato: Maya? Maya is that you? Maya: Masato...san Masato: I'm so relieved, I wanted to see you. I'm glad I finally found you. - Masato smiles - Masato: Let's try being together again [page 34] :: He loves me, I should be happy, but I don't feel anything Maya: I... Maya: Why are you saying this? - Masata inspects her hickey - Masato: You have a kiss mark from a guy. Should I be worried? // Maya's heart beats // Maya covers her hickey Maya: This is.. - Masato cups her chin and Maya sweatdrops nervously - // Masato laughs Masato: I don't need excuses, I saw the look in your eyes, you wanted it. I'm relieved you finally lost your virginity. :: I don't like the way he is touching me, he's giving me the chills. I need to get away! [page 35] :: My body won't budge, why is he saying such straightforward words :: Even if he's just playing around or curious, I don't want this :: REN! Maya: ...St ... ENOUGH! - A hand grabs Masato's shoulder - [page 36] // Ren punches Masato :: Ren Masato: Wh...What the hell are you doing.. // Ren grabs Masato's shirt Ren: Get out of my sight before I break your jaw [page 37] Ren: Maya, are you okay? :: Honestly, I'm really happy - Maya remembers what Ren said - :: "I was curious" Maya: Why... did you come here? I'm not looking for sympathy. :: He's completely unaffected Maya: ..... you're the worst... // Maya's depressed [page 38] - Ren grabs Maya and hugs her tightly - Ren: I was about to confess to you Ren: "I was curious" _at_ first [page 39] Ren: Always during basketball when you came and watched you would always turn the other way and not look at me. You were such a rude woman. Sooo.. I decided to make plans. Text next to Maya's head: Rude woman? {really?} Ren: I decided I would make you look at me Ren: ....but you were always so obsitant I didn't know of a way. I was so charmed by you. - Maya looks completely shocked with tears welling up in her eyes - [page 40] Maya: Ren :: I don't want to let you go Ren: It turned out differently, forgive me. I love you Maya. - Ren deeply kisses Maya - [page 41] :: Those words further made me passionate :: How you already were feeling... - END OF Amai Yokuhou